Compare 1587 edition: 1 The Gentle|women are preſerued in Camelon.Furthermore into the citie of Camelon were withdrawen the moſte parte of all the noble mens wiues of the Picts with their chyldren vpõ truſte to be ſafe in the ſame, aſwell by reaſon of the ſtrength of the place, as alſo of the ſtrong garyſon whiche was appoynted to defende it.

Compare 1587 edition: 1 Kenneth ſen|deth vnto Ca|melon, com|maunding thẽ for to yeelde.Kenneth therefore hauyng taken his plea|ſure abroade in the countrey, came thyther with a mighty armie to beſiege the Citie, and firſte ſendyng vnto them within, to knowe if they woulde yeelde, he was aunſwered howe ſithe it plainely appeared that the Scottes coulde be ſa|tiſfied with nothing but with the ſlaughter of all ſuche as fell into theyr handes, aſwell of women and chyldren, with impotent age, as of other, they were minded neuer to ſurrender theyr holde with lyfe. Wherevpon the ſiege continued by the ſpace of many dayes.

Compare 1587 edition: 1 They of Ca|melon require truce for three dayes.Whyleſt the Scottes in the meane tyme gotte togither greate number of faggottes, and other ſuche bruſhe and ſtuffe to fill the ditches withall whiche were very deepe and broade, at length when they within beganne to want vi|tayles, they requyred a truce for three dayes, in the whiche meane time they might take aduiſe for the ſurrender of the Citie.