Compare 1587 edition: 1 He hapned by ſome good aduenture to eſpy a|mongſt y^e watch of thoſe y^t were of the retinue of Dauid Erle of Huntingtõ, one of his own kinſ|mẽ named Iohn Durward,Iohn Dur|warde. with whom of long time before he had bin moſt familiarly acquain|ted: and incõtinẽtly he called vnto y^e ſame Dur|ward, deſiring vnder aſſurãce to talke with him. After certain cõmunicatiõ, for y^t this Oliuer had not as yet vtterly in his hart renoũced y^e chriſti|an faith, he appointed with Durwarde to giue entrie at a certaine houre vnto Erle Dauid,Erle Dauid en+tred the citie Acon. & to al y^e chriſtian army, vpon condition y^t Erle Da|uid wold ſee him reſtored again vnto his land & heritage in Scotlãd. The houre ſet, Erle Dauid came with a great power of [...] to y^e gate before reherſed, where he was ſuffred to enter acording to apointmẽt, and incontinẽtly with great noiſe and elamour brake into the middeſt of the citie,

Compare 1587 edition: 1 In the morning betimes king Richard per|ceiuing the citie thus wonne, entred the ſame, & ſhortly after alſo wan a towre, which the Sara|ſins for a while mãfully defended: and thus was the citie of Acres won from the Saraſins, chiefly by meanes of the Scottiſhemen. But now tou|ching their returne from this voyage (for ſith in other places more large mencion is made of ſuch exploites as were atchieued therin, I paſſe ouer to make any lõger diſcourſe therof in this place) ye ſhall vnderſtand, y^t in that ſtreynable tempeſt, in y^e whiche king Richards nauie was diſperſed in his cõming homewardes (as in the hiſtorie of England is more at large expreſſed) y^e ſhip alſo that Erle Dauid was in, chaunced to be thrown a lande on the coaſtes of Egypt, where being ta|ken priſoner, & led into Alexandria,Erle Dauid ta|ken priſoner. He is redemed at length he was redemed by certain merchants of Venice, & firſt conueyed vnto Conſtantinople, & after vn|to Venice, where he was bought out, & redeemed by the Engliſh marchants, & in the end ſuffred to depart home. At his cõming into Flanders, he hyred a veſſell at Sluyce,He wente to Scotlande. therwith to returne in|to Scotland, but beieng lewſed a little off from the ſhore, ſuch a behement tempeſt ſodenly aroſe that droue him, not without great dãger of life, neere to the coaſtes of Norway and Shetland.

Compare 1587 edition: 1 Here in the middeſt of this extreme ieopardie (as hath bin reported) after he had made a vowe to buylde a Churche in the honour of the virgin Mary, if he myght eſcape that daunger of ſeas,A [...]ed at Dund [...]e. he ariued at length in Tay water beſyde Dun|dee, not farre from Saint Nicholas Chapell, without eyther rudder or tackle.